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Démarré par patard, 13 Mar 2008 15:53
Citation de: patard le 14 Mar 2008 08:19Hello john and everybodyWhat we could do is to take the first sentenceThe story began in a little village more than sixty years ago , a little village not far from Etampes in the south of Paris.or a little more for instanceThe story began in a little village more than sixty years ago , a little village not far from Etampes in the south of Paris.At this time Peter was three years old . He did'nt yet went to school. He spent the biggest part of his time alone or sometimes with other little boys or girls of his age running on field or wood around his house We could talk John ,Nicolas , Mamour, Flo , Kate , Bettina ........Everybody.Is it clear ? Is possible to understand what I want to say .Is the grammar good or not.for instance I am wondering if a the beggining "The story began "is correct , or if " the story begin " would be betterThen I repeat "a little village " I think it is a mistake, I could have write :The story begin (or began ) in a little village more than sixty years ago not far from Etampes in the south of Paris.Of course it is just a way to work to help to improve our english.John , Nicolas,mamour, flo, Kate , Bettina could put on the forum there own text . And I am ready to work on there text to put it in better english, and then to improve my own english and the english of all of us.Thomas could get in the discussion at the end of each sentence to helpReally best regards to everybody
Citation de: mamour le 14 Mar 2008 08:46Nice story!!!that remember me the stories that my"grand mother"in my work narrate me!!!
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